Step 15: Turbulence

Kind:
As a special thanks for participating in our 7-day “tinnitus liberation first steps” ecourse, we’ve placed 36.99 into your account with CureTinnitus.org. That covers the cost of your welcome package (including Julian Cowan Hill’s eBook Tinnitus: From Tyrant to Friend), along with your first month’s member dues. This is part of a very limited time promotional offer and is only available for 100 people (check the subscribe button to see how many we have left). I really, honestly, and quite adamantly had to twist Julian Cowan Hill’s arm to make this offer possible for you. He is VERY skeptical that giving away information to people with tinnitus can bring about positive results, because most “free-seekers” just toss the information and gain nothing from it (and are simply not committed to healing). So, Julian is allowing me to run this offer as a one-time test, to see what kind of people come on board as a result.

This offer is available to you for the duration of your 7-day Complimentary eCourse + 3 days, but again, once the 100 spots are taken, we will take this offer down, concentrate on taking care of our new members, and will assess whether we ever want to make this kind of offer again.

I personally believe that everyone that suffers from tinnitus should be a member of CureTinnitus.org, the help is that good. And I stake my reputation on it. And I am the only Dainis W. Michel on this planet of ours. So, honestly, that’s saying a lot.

Meaner:
The [7 Reasons] We’re Getting Better From Tinnits, and YOU’RE NOT.

I want to do something along these lines:
You’ve been a subscriber to our free opt in list for over 6 months and have not joined our program. It costs me a lot of money to keep people in the fold like this, and I’d like to ask you to either join or unsubscribe or let me know what is going on. If money is your barrier, then I recommend you join my list here for people with tinnitus that are struggling with money. Money is an issue that’s actually a heck of a lot easier to resolve than a lot of people think.

Mean:
Look, this website is not for people who are pussy-footing around, this is the real deal, and it is for people who are ready to take action NOW. This offer is going out only to people who registered for our free program, and if you didn’t “feel” your tinnitus letting up while going through our program, if you didn’t feel that we’re providing the right information for you, I really really want you to unsubscribe NOW.

This is a special privilege that we are offering ONLY to people who’ve taken our 7-day complimentary eCourse. By getting this letter, you’ve earned the right to claim your 36.99 bonus and one of 100 (and going fast) memberships. If you don’t want it, do nothing, and we’ll happily help the next tinnitus sufferer on our list, the one who is ready to take action and move towards healing.

Again, if you don’t like the feelings I’m stirring up in you, PLEASE UNSUBSCRIBE. Because we only want people seriously interested in healing themselves. We attract really sincere, wonderful people. The interaction in our community is positive, friendly, healing, and settling…and I really want you to experience it.

You probably will never get a chance to work with Julian personally, he is after all, one of the most sought-after tinnitus healing experts in the world. If this offer starts to tax his schedule, and we attract the wrong kind of leachy lethargic losers with this offer, well, we will be forced to quickly pull the plug on this offer.

So join right now, while you’re thinking about it. You risk absolutely nothing and pay only 1cent right now. With one penny, you can begin your journey from tinnitus to liberation. It really is that simple.

Possible
I’ve put together a very special offer for folks to be able to join CureTinnitus.org. First of all, anyone currently paying $25/month will be lowered to $17/month (if you want that, you can stay at $25/month, if you want to give extra support to our organization). And the special offer is that your friends and family, from Date X to Date Y, can gain access to CureTinnitus.org for 1cent for a 30 day trial (and thereafter pay/donate $17 per month). Julian has agreed to 100 spots for this trial offer, and I REALLY had to twist his arm to make this happen. I want current members to be able to help their friends and family as much as possible, so you know about this offer first. Here is the payment link that you can send to them, so they can be a part of CureTinnitus.org right away.

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DainisM
Post subject: Re: Step 15: Turbulence
Post Posted: Wed Nov 04, 2009 5:49 am
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I’d like to figure out some “turbulence” methods I can test.

Urgency: 100 spots, I could also have a page disappear after 10 min or something like that

Greed-Inducing Limitations: how could this apply in my niche?

“Fear of Being Left Out” Take-Away: I think I tried this above

Elbow to the ribs opportunity: Seems like that’s what I’ve got going on above.

Kevin, when you dig into the copy itself I feel I learn the most. I can then create variations and re-writes and post to see what you think.

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Post subject: Re: Step 15: Turbulence
Post Posted: Wed Nov 04, 2009 8:24 am
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The writing is good all around, Dainis… but the “Kind” version is far and away the best.

I like your use of “people not respecting free stuff” through the mind of your expert. You’ve also done a great job with scarcity in there (check to see how many are left). Couple small notes:

1. This offer is available to you for the duration of your 7-day Complimentary eCourse + 3 days, but again, once the 100 spots are taken, we will take this offer down. (STOP)

Consider cutting the following, the reader probably doesn’t care what else you plan to do, only what they’ll miss out on. concentrate on taking care of our new members, and will assess whether we ever want to make this kind of offer again.

2. I personally believe that everyone that suffers from tinnitus should be a member of CureTinnitus.org, the help is that good. (STOP)

The following has nice personality, but I think the turbulence has more punch without it. And I stake my reputation on it. And I am the only Dainis W. Michel on this planet of ours. So, honestly, that’s saying a lot.

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Personal notes…

whether you’ve just stumbled on this page via a web search, or if you’ve been a long-time subscriber to our newsletter…this offer is yours…if you act fast enough…

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  1. admin says:

    I have 10 spots where you can get a 9997 up front + 3600 per month product for one tenth the cost.

    Until DATE, you don’t pay the initial 1000

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    I don’t think Austrians will like this AT ALL.

    Some kind of very low-pressure selling…like “oh that makes sense.” We go from the standpoint that if it makes sense to them, they’ll do it.

    Also, price may not really be the card to play. This worked for me in Austria before, because I was in a good place with my ongoing income.

    Q: I heard from my colleague (who I had cold called, I think) that you do translations, can you help us?
    A: It’s true that I do translations from time to time and that I have the best guarantee on the market, however, I am expensive and have a lot on my plate and could refer you to someone less expensive
    Q: Can you tell me about your guarantee and when you might have time?
    A: I guarantee the perceived language level, the “language level experience” of your readers on a scale of 1-10. My clients buy, for example, an 8/10, and I don’t sell 10/10, because that is left to Shakespeare, Milton, and other greats. (ha ha). Anyway, I guarantee that purchased language level for one year, and if your readership finds fault with the language level (and their claims turn out to be true), then you get 100% of your money back. That’s how it works, however, like I said, I am booked solid and can refer you to someone else less expensive.
    Q: We really need X done by date X, could you do that? I’ve attached the text to be translated and a description of the project.
    A: Short notice projects have an additional fee of 200 Euro and I cost 90 Euro per hour. Please let me know if you are interested.
    Q: I talked with my supervisor and we really want you to do this.
    A: I have attached my contract to this email and am willing to schedule our “translation communications call” for Date1 or Date 2, does Date 2 in the afternoon work for you or Date 1 at 9AM

    deal closed

    That actually worked and happened to me.

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